haku: translations

[watertank]

John Brandi
from "HAIKU MOMENT"

in the rain before the dawn: snails migrating

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[pggmilltn.livejournal.com]

I sense a childrens song in that haiku

"Its raining
It's pouring
The snails are
migrating

something something
da da da
da dee de words and wo-ords"

[another-goner.livejournal.com]

в дождь
перед рассветом
улитки ползут

[ediblesnail.livejournal.com]

И это Я!

[watertank.livejournal.com]

yeah, I can see children and snails marching and singing in the rain :-)

[watertank.livejournal.com]

хорошо получилось. даже лучше :-)

[watertank.livejournal.com]

Да здравствуют отважно ползущие улитки!

[another-goner.livejournal.com]

спасибо :)

[edbook.livejournal.com]

I hear them
from here in the desert
slugs munching my garden

Peace