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John Brandi
from "HAIKU MOMENT"

in the rain
before the dawn: snails
migrating
под дождем
на рассвете на марше:
улитки

Date: 2003-03-31 10:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pggmilltn.livejournal.com
I sense a childrens song in that haiku

"Its raining
It's pouring
The snails are
migrating

something something
da da da
da dee de words and wo-ords"

Date: 2003-04-01 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] watertank.livejournal.com
yeah, I can see children and snails marching and singing in the rain :-)

Date: 2003-03-31 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] another-goner.livejournal.com
в дождь
перед рассветом
улитки ползут

Date: 2003-04-01 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] watertank.livejournal.com
хорошо получилось. даже лучше :-)

Date: 2003-04-02 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] another-goner.livejournal.com
спасибо :)

Date: 2003-03-31 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ediblesnail.livejournal.com
И это Я!

Date: 2003-04-01 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] watertank.livejournal.com
Да здравствуют отважно ползущие улитки!

Date: 2003-04-02 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] edbook.livejournal.com
I hear them
from here in the desert
slugs munching my garden

Peace

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