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Nov. 5th, 2005 10:23 pmWhat mesmerizes me the most in Gary Hotham's haiku is his work with space and time. Everything is so real, you can almost feel the lacunae in the sky, in the water, in somebody's tracks left in the sand, in the autumn itself. I already posted some of his haiku in this journal, but here's some more from his little book "breathmarks". I wonder how that would be in Russian...
fog.
sitting here
without mountains
walking more slowly -
leaves falling
foot tracks being filled
with snow
fog.
sitting here
without mountains
time to go -to hear them
the stones we threw
to the bottom of the oceanthis summer night -
she lets the firefly glow
through the cage of her fingers
outside the door
daylight
waits
walking more slowly -
leaves falling
stalled car.early in the night -
the stars we can see
the space for more
foot tracks being filled
with snow